Looking for some criticism

[moki]

Not to push my luck or anything, but any chance of seeing the changes I suggested for the computer style logo? I realize that one isn't as easy to update.

honestly, probably not for a bit -- that'd take a total redo, which isn't in the cards in the short-term.

 

[moki]

Alright, here are the final refined beanies. On the left are slightly smaller beanies. On the right are the same smaller beanies, but tilted a bit more to the left. At the bottom are some of the logos with the new typefaces, and the beanie larger and to the left of the logo:

My personal choice would be one of the ones from the right-hand column. I like the staid black text logo with the colorful beanie playfully tilting off of it. I think it makes a nice statement, as well as being visually interesting and memorable.

It certainly plays off of your "nerd for hire" slogan while still being dignified, IMHO. Will reproduce well large or small, and is distinctive.

The beanie *on* the logo not only seems more fun and clever to me, but also "feels" more hands-on. I like the second or third one from the top, in the right-hand column personally.

Anyone else's comments welcome, especially yours, DaveWF!

 

[DaveWF]

I'd have to say, of the top eight, I like the lower right the best.

You know this thread isn't just for Moki & me.... Anyone else have an opinion?

Jump on in,
Dave

 

[Gunpowder]

Wife and I voted that we do not like the beanie logo. She said scrap the photo on your ad, She likes the Nerd referance at the bottom but we agree that your add is too busy.

we both think that your original logo in the top left of your ad is a better idea but it needs simplified. Make sure your logo can be embroidered or silk screened so that means keep the detail to a minimum and no more than 2 colors. three at a maximum but it will cost more.

We also liked the lavender logo with a tilted DWF.

the DWF Computers logo on the previous page (top left) is too long and wouldn't fit well on a Polo shirt.

 

[CoventryCat86]

I really have no idea ???

I am not at all creative nor do I have a good eye for these types of things.

Asking me to offer suggestions in this area is kind of like asking a surgeon for ideas on how to build a bridge.

Now, if you needed advice on Jaugars...........

 

[lbrief]

Personally, I’d lose the beanie. The sans-serif fonts and stacked block effect are nice clean and professional. I think I’d just leave it at that.

I realize the concept behind the beanie is to depict “computer nerd”. But is misses the mark. There are two kinds of computer nerds: the “Bill Gates” kind, and the “comic-book-store guy from The Simpsons” kind. The beanie conjures up visions of the latter.

If there must be “nerd” symbolism, use a pocket protector or slide-rule. But better yet, leave it out entirely and just go with the stylized text.

 

[Gunpowder]

Personally, I’d lose the beanie. The sans-serif fonts and stacked block effect are nice clean and professional. I think I’d just leave it at that.

I realize the concept behind the beanie is to depict “computer nerd”. But is misses the mark. There are two kinds of computer nerds: the “Bill Gates” kind, and the “comic-book-store guy from The Simpsons” kind. The beanie conjures up visions of the latter.

If there must be “nerd” symbolism, use a pocket protector or slide-rule. But better yet, leave it out entirely and just go with the stylized text.

Well Put. I think the professional look will go farther.

 

[blair]

Personally, I like this one the best!

But, I seem to be in the minority. I think it looks serious. I think serious is good. :thumbs:

 

[Gunpowder]

Looks interesting but the effect might not be able to be reproduced in B&W or screenprinting.

 

[Muley]

dave,
gonna email you a small gif.

 

[DaveWF]

Got it - and I like it, but it's much too busy.

Here it is if anyone else wants to see it:

Dave

 

[moki]

I agree Dave -- that's much too busy for a logo. Something clean, distinctive, memorable, and more importantly, resonates with *you* is what you should use.

 

[lbrief]

Re: Muley's design

Agreed, it's too much for a logo.

But, it (or something based on it) has a ton of potential for "mini ads". You know, for the times when the local peewee football team hits you up for an ad in their program. Everyone usually just runs a copy of thier business card, but something like this has a bit more flair.

I'm just saying, hang on to the concept, it may come in quite handy sometime.

 

[dixieland_conjunction]

Here was my revised version.

Cheers,
Dixie

 

[DaveWF]

Hey Dixie, something going on with your images? None of 'em show up for me.

Dave

 

[dixieland_conjunction]

All fixed.

When I got my new computer, I lost all my old website files (including ~75% of all photos I've ever taken :angry: ). It was going to be quite an unertaking to get all that site even in operable. I was drastically out-dated and needed to be redone anyway. Long story longer, I went ahead an put did a little much-needed maintenence on my site and hosted my CP images there rather than on the free site that didnn't allow linking.

Cheers,
Dixie

 

[DaveWF]

Hey Dixie, sorry to hear about your problems. It looks like you're going with Network solutions hosting. If that's the case, I can definately beat their prices - heck, even if you're going with someone else, I can probably beat their prices. Shoot me a PM or check out my Hosting Page for more details.

Dave

 

[DaveWF]

Whoa. Ok, so everyone remembers that Frank (lbrief) was doing some ad design work for me, right?

Well HOT DAMN, look what he has come up with so far!

First Draft

He asked that if I post it here, I include a few explanations...

I usually don’t feed a customer roughs; I wait until everything is perfect and then send it. But, technically you’re not a customer; you’re a CP brother!

Just be aware of a few things.
1. This is rough; it will only get better as I work on it.
2. It is just a Black and White version (I like to work stuff up that way because it goes much faster) color can/will be incorporated later.
3. You will get a better feel for the design if you print it out (the monitor tends to distort things).
4. I have some other ideas that I’ll be putting together ASAP, (so don’t be discouraged if you don’t happen to like this direction).

All I can say is "WOW". Is that SWEET of what? All this, and he'll be adding color too?

I guess since it looks like the ad is nearing completion, it's time to figure out the logos..... Look for a poll later today with what I consider the top contenders to be.

Thanks Frank!!! :thumbs: :thumbs:

Dave

 

[moki]

Now THAT is a nice ad. Very well done, lbrief.

It looks like he's using one of the logos I had done, sans the beannie cap -- it looks good!

Love the layout. Traditional, but attracive, nice separation, distinctive, etc.

 

[DaveWF]

The poll is up! Vote for your favorite logo.
http://www.cigarpass.com/forumsipb/index.php?showtopic=6287